Tuesday 29 November 2011

ENL Assignment 2- formal outline


ENL Assignment
Formal Outline
Introduction:
The world is mystery. There some paranormal phenomenon that human cannot explain. This time, we talk about ghost. Ghost is a type of spirit. The good spirit we call “it” soul while the bad one we call “it” ghost. Sometime, ghost may bring the bad thing for us. Some scientific don’t believe it but they cannot explain. Are they real? Do you believe “it”?
Points:
1. Kids can see “it” easily; baby feel it and cry n sick
Supporting details-Kid’s sense is sensitive and they have nothing to block their sense to the nature. Therefore the kid’s will say they saw something in a corner or something that we can’t see and explain.
Supporting details- They are more experience that we get from the babies. For example, babies will cry in a sudden and we don’t know what happen to them. Elder will not allow parents bring their kids or babies go out at night because they worry the baby and the kids will attract ghost cause kids and babies are more sensitive.
Conclusion sentences- The sense of babies and kids are more sensitive than adult therefore the ghost more like to be close to them.
2. Tradition of Chinese, Malay n India
Supporting details-There are many tradition in different religion. Some believe the existence of ghost while some not but they still believe there is some mystery phenomenon that human can’t explain.
Supporting details- Chinese celebrate the Hungry Ghost Festival. This festival is means to the holiday of ghost in hell. The door of the hell will open and let the ghost come out to the world for 1 month. So, Chinese will less to go out at night or midnight to avoid meet ghost.
3. School, hospital, ns camp
Supporting details-School and hospital are always the place have the most story of ghost. In school, there are many girls who
be dissapointed in love affair and commit suicide. In hospital, there is usual that doctors or nurses meet ghost because hospital is the place that most people die there.
Conclusion sentences-the tradition is one of the way that human believe the existence of ghost so they believe the ghost is real.
4. Movie: paranormal activity
Supporting details- Horror movie cause the sense of human sensitive to the ghost, so sometime they may say the movie is the reason that cause people thinking too much to ghost and this make the human they frighten themselves. 
Supporting details- Movie is always a story not real. Is that all true? The first episode of paranormal activity actually is the real story and they really get the video of that story. The second and the third episode only is the fake story.
Conclusion sentence- Movie is not really the fake but also there are fact inside the movie.
5. Normal situation, day or night, sleeping or hear someone calling n dream
Supporting details- do you hear someone calling your name behind you? If there is no one there, people always says that don’t turn around your head.
Supporting details- at night, when you walking along a dark street there will increase the percentage of meet to the ghost.
conclusion sentences- when your fortune is bad then may have a chance to see it, and the percentage will increase at night in a peaceful place. 
6. Genting Highlands
Supporting details- Genting is one of the place that have many ghost even in the hotels, casino or the road.
Supporting details- gambler have their own way to win money by the helping of ghost.
conclusion sentences- Genting is on the mountain therefore the magnetic field and the condition cause the ghost like to stay there. As we know, ghost like to stay in the forest also.
A video found in Youtube that can show during presentation. A video take in Ria Apartment of Genting Highlands.

Conclusion:
As a conclusion, ghost is cannot explain and “they” are exist in anywhere and anytime. In my view, I believe that they are real. The scientist can believe the appearance of alien but why not the ghost? Maybe really there are another world that human don’t know it’s existence. Do you believe it? Are they real? Believe it, or not.

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